Feed Back on Clinton’s Letter.

November 14, 2007 carmella7

I would just like to begin by saying that this was one of my favorite assignments so far in this class. Despite the fact that I was dissapointed in my grade, I did enjoy the topic. The benefits of being an average writer is that you can only improve. There is not set standards for you to be perfect so it is only fair to say that you are getting better. Positive feedback that I recieved about my letter was who I wrote it to, Hillary Clinton’s campaign manager. Not an everyday person that we all know. The question that I was asking was also important and relevant to today’s public. I displayed political writing correctly. As well as I was polite and explicit. This will help me when I begin to write my research paper. It will be easier for me to pick a unique idea such as red sox reporting. Be able to be unique will help me find information that will be intriguing to my readers. I know alot about what I see in reporting being a huge red sox fan since birth, but i do not know what goes on behind the scences, an interest in women’s rights I have noticed that with the Boston Red Sox many reporters are now women! This bringing challenges to the men of the profession. I hope this will be of interest to all of Red Sox Nation including my teacher. With my writing I am hoping to improve on organization and flow before the end of the semester.